Last week Linda Phillips shared the backstory behind her debut novel, Crazy. As Linda’s close friend, one thing I have witnessed is how much she has learned and how she has not taken any part of this journey for granted. In this second post, she shares more of her insights.
down, patience part two was required
with the dog of all dogs: revisions. But
I have to confess that I learned a ton about my own writing through that
process.
takeaways:
- One of the things I do best is repeat myself, especially if it has
an emotional valence. - I rarely place the relevant pronoun immediately after its
antecedent. - A large cast of minor characters is like trying to find a missing
cat in dense fog. - There is such a thing as tragedy overload.
- A little slang
goes a long ways. - If you are writing about a specific year in time, be sure
you research the etymology of words relevant to that year (how shocked I was to
find that 1963 was not a “groovy” year). - If it serves no useful purpose, trash
it. - Give your protagonist a spectacularly unique personality and then, like
a good parent, make sure she remains true to character throughout.
seriously. (hold me to this when the
reviews start rolling in!) This part I
can do only with God’s help. The writing
life is such a roller coaster ride and I am admittedly already a roller-coaster
personality type. There has been and
will continue to be many nail-biting, hair-splitting moments, and many with
positive outcomes. But I have had
occasion already to remind myself that “this is just a book” and there is life
beyond these words and pages that I have poured so much of myself into.
life that includes quality family time, good health, and continued writing
success. Repeat after me: This is not life and death, it is just a book.
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Appreciated learning about the term “emotional valence,” a new one for me.
Me too, Barbara. That's why I linked to it!
Thanks for dropping in Barbara. I'm chuckling about “emotional valence” because I guess I have “taken it for granted” that others were familiar with this term that I have often used without thinking about it!
Emotional Valence is also new to me.This is not life or death. It's just a book. Oh, yeah, well it's killing me!I'm curious about the pronoun and the antecedent. Is this a writing style thing? Want to give me an example from the book?
Thanks for sharing all of this, Linda. This is very instructive. Good luck with Crazy.
Thanks Joyce and Rosi. Now we'll wait for LInda's answer!
Linda,Great tips and super poem! Can't wait for the rest.Carol,Thanks for the 2-part interview!
Thanks, Linda A! I'm sure Linda P will be happy to read your comment!
I can't think of an exact example from the book about pronouns and antecedents, but it goes something like this. I might be talking about Joyce and Carol in a sentence and then in the next sentence I say “she said” but leave everyone hanging as to whether the antecedent is Joyce or Carol. I'm not an English teacher so let me know if this isn't clear, ha! All I know is I do it all the time (according to my wonderful editor).
Thanks Rosi and Linda A. for your faithful reading of this blog and your kind comments.
Linda, So exciting to hear about your adventures with revision. I am also trying to balance by writing time and my family life. With so many deadlines I get overwhelmed with getting it all done! Can't wait to read Crazy!!
Thanks for sharing, Linda! I never heard of emotional valence either. And yes, I totally agree about trying to keep all the roller coaster ups and downs of this process in perspective. So looking forward to reading your book! Miriam
Thanks, Sheri & Miriam. We're going to have quite a party when this book finally arrives!
Thanks for your kind comments Sheri and Miriam. Here's hoping we can all keep a good perspective and balance in our writing life versus “the rest of our life.” I think with some focused effort, we can do it!
Congratulations, Linda! I am so excited for you. Can't wait to read your book!
Thanks, Dorothy! One of our own–finally!
Thanks for your kind words, Dorothy and congratulations on your own writing accomplishments!
Congratulations Linda! and thank you for sharing your advice-and thank you Carol, I always learn something new when I read your blog!
Thanks, Kathy. Glad it was helpful to you!
Appreciated learning about the term “emotional valence,” a new one for me.
Me too, Barbara. That's why I linked to it!
Thanks for dropping in Barbara. I'm chuckling about “emotional valence” because I guess I have “taken it for granted” that others were familiar with this term that I have often used without thinking about it!
Emotional Valence is also new to me.This is not life or death. It's just a book. Oh, yeah, well it's killing me!I'm curious about the pronoun and the antecedent. Is this a writing style thing? Want to give me an example from the book?
Thanks for sharing all of this, Linda. This is very instructive. Good luck with Crazy.
Thanks Joyce and Rosi. Now we'll wait for LInda's answer!
Linda,Great tips and super poem! Can't wait for the rest.Carol,Thanks for the 2-part interview!
Thanks, Linda A! I'm sure Linda P will be happy to read your comment!
I can't think of an exact example from the book about pronouns and antecedents, but it goes something like this. I might be talking about Joyce and Carol in a sentence and then in the next sentence I say “she said” but leave everyone hanging as to whether the antecedent is Joyce or Carol. I'm not an English teacher so let me know if this isn't clear, ha! All I know is I do it all the time (according to my wonderful editor).
Thanks Rosi and Linda A. for your faithful reading of this blog and your kind comments.
Linda, So exciting to hear about your adventures with revision. I am also trying to balance by writing time and my family life. With so many deadlines I get overwhelmed with getting it all done! Can't wait to read Crazy!!
Thanks for sharing, Linda! I never heard of emotional valence either. And yes, I totally agree about trying to keep all the roller coaster ups and downs of this process in perspective. So looking forward to reading your book! Miriam
Thanks, Sheri & Miriam. We're going to have quite a party when this book finally arrives!
Thanks for your kind comments Sheri and Miriam. Here's hoping we can all keep a good perspective and balance in our writing life versus “the rest of our life.” I think with some focused effort, we can do it!
Congratulations, Linda! I am so excited for you. Can't wait to read your book!
Thanks, Dorothy! One of our own–finally!
Thanks for your kind words, Dorothy and congratulations on your own writing accomplishments!
Congratulations Linda! and thank you for sharing your advice-and thank you Carol, I always learn something new when I read your blog!
Thanks, Kathy. Glad it was helpful to you!